I have just finished putting together a story for my grandson. The story was fun and Jayden and I had a hoot reading it. But what interested me was the impact that it made on my young grandson's understanding about the way print works that made the experience really stand out. Young Jayden, was part of the whole "book writing" process and contributed by writing to the main character (Ernie) on a regular basis. He owned the story line and is having a blast sharing it with any family member who will listen. My learning intention was to bring home the concept that writing has a purpose and can also be fun.
I thought you might be interested in the story set-up.
Mystery Visitor at
Brannenbrook
It wasn’t
expected. It wasn’t requested. No one predicted it. It just happened one dark
December morning.
I woke up kind
of cranky. It was still dark.
“Winter!
It’s dark when you wake up. It’s dark before supper . Winter isn’t
fun! Winter is dark. I hate winter!”
I did a lot
of complaining back then. I complained
in the morning. I complained in the afternoon. And at supper-time, I complained. But that
all changed December 12, 2014.
Why this big
change? What made my frown turn upside
down? What happened to make Grandma
Grumpy Pants do a three-sixty attitude adjustment?
I give full
credit to a certain short visitor who
showed up (totally uninvited ) in my
living room. And I mean really short...as
in fifteen centimetres and I repeat TOTALLY
UNINVITED!
He wore a
floppy red hat with a white stripe. He
had a collar that was perfectly white.
His shirt was red and for some reason he wore white mittens. His eyes twinkled.
At first I
thought he had a smile on his face, but the more I looked, the more I would
have to say it was an impish, mischievous grin. His arms and legs were long and
skinny. Short, skinny and dressed in red and white. Oh and one more
detail. It was as if he was frozen in time. Not a move did he make.
I decided to
call Jayden. He is short. Maybe he knows what is going on.
“Jayden, get
over here! There is a very short person playing scrabble with the Pine Forest
animals! “ I yelled into the phone.
I decided to
call Jayden. He is short. Maybe he knows what is going on.
“Jayden, get
over here! There is a very short person playing scrabble with the Pine Forest
animals! “ I yelled into the phone.
Jayden came
running over to the house...(We live on the same farm.)
“Look! Can
you believe your eyes?”
“Grandma, he spelled BUM!”
“That is all
you have to say? He spelled BUM!!!!
Who is he ? Why is he here?” What should we do?”
“I don’t
know Grandma. He looks like an Elf. Let’s call him Ernie. Ernie Elf.
Hey, look at
Moosie, Reindeer and Mountain Goat. They can read! Did you know they play Scrabble? Did you know they could read?”
“This is a
real mystery. You better get to school. There is something strange going on at this
farm.”
But Jayden
didn’t seem to think it was very strange.
When he came home from school he came over and started playing Scrabble
with Moosie, Reindeer and Mountain Goat. They had fun.
I just hope
Ernie doesn’t teach Moosie how to spell BUM!
The next
morning was interesting. As soon as I
got out of bed, I checked to see if there was a Scrabble game going on. Nope.
No scrabble game. The drawer was
no longer askew and everything seemed nice and tidy.
Mysterious
short visitor- gone. Pine Forest animals playing Scrabble- gone. Good riddance
to “Short Uninvited Guests”.
I was just
about to start complaining about the rotten winter weather when I saw something
on the living room floor.
This is what
I saw!
Twizzle
Sticks! Really? How did he get into my secret candy cupboard? I need to get a lock for that cupboard! Does
he really think Pine Forest animals know how a maze works?
On the third
day of this madness, Jayden discovered
Ernie on the very top shelf of a bookcase.
“Jayden, do you know what Ernie is doing all night
long?” I asked, hoping my grandson would
solve this mystery.
Well
Grandma, can’t you see? They are playing
“Go Fish.”
“That is all
you can say? They are playing “Go Fish”!!!
Why are they here?
How did they get in?
Where did they get the cards?
Who invited them?
How do the Pine Forest animals know how to read numbers?”
I asked hoping my detective grandson would solve this mystery.
“Grandma,
are you cranky today? I think Ernie
likes everyone to have fun.”
Don’t worry,
I will write Ernie a letter and ask him to explain everything.”
Well Jayden
wrote Ernie lots of notes, but Ernie only wrote back one time.
Ernie asked
if Jayden had good candy at his house. Can you believe this guy?
We are finally getting used to our new visitor. Jayden arrives bright and early to help me
find the little imp. I have to admit, he
is kind of funny.
I also must
agree with Jayden that Ernie likes everyone to have fun.
Here are more examples of Ernie’s antics.
Into the toothpaste!
That’s
right! He likes to play checkers!
Ernie
decided to visit Jayden’s house and got into Scott’s shaving cream.
I didn’t think Elves needed to shave!
Ernie thinks
he should be in a circus. One night he made a zip-line and used candy canes to
swing across Jayden’s playroom!
Jayden
worked hard to solve the “Ernie Mystery”. He made lots of notes and kept a good case file -as all good detectives do. Here are some of his observations.
The Ernie Case File
1. Grandma laughs every time she sees
what Ernie has done all night long.
2. Ernie has a hard time staying away
from candy.
3. Ernie likes to play games with his
friends. (He has elf friends and likes Pine Forest Animals.)
4. Ernie thinks shaving cream and
toothpaste are play things.
5. Ernie can read the letters I write
him, but he doesn’t answer important
questions.
6. Ernie and his friends did not get into the cookies we left for
Santa.
7. When Grandma went to feed the horses
on Christmas morning ten bales of
hay had disappeared- vanished!
8. Grandma, Grandpa, Mummy, Scott,
Jayden and Tubbs got all the things they asked for from Santa.
The Ernie Mystery remains unsolved.
Maybe next
year, on a dark December morning, we will discover a short, impish, uninvited,
visitor on top of a bookshelf.
Ernie Elf... you are always welcome at Brannenbrook
Farm.
You are fun
and you make us laugh!
P.S. Lilly
and Athena say they will make sure there is lots of hay for Christmas Eve.
(Just in case.)
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